Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, November 20, 2020
Splendid speech
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Hi lily-piper!
ReplyDeleteErina here
This is a really good speech!
Better than my a least.
I think that if you got into the speech finals you would do amazing!
I loved how you mentioned the animals because I absolutely loooooove animals and hate what people are are doing to them.
Bye for now!