Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 17, 2020
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hey L.P Its Ava I really liked the way you presented your slides with the cool backgrounds and writing. I'm wondering why didn't you put a question?
ReplyDeleteanyway i hope you get some good comments and feedback so you can look back a wonder what can i do better next time.
sincerely Ava.
Wow LP, this is very cool, I can't believe the Australian family who accidentally bought all that toilet paper! I wonder what on earth they are going to do with it all now? I really like how you've made your slide look like a newspaper with the pages turning, very cool effect. I also like how you have followed our Think 6 process. Your post is informative, interesting and catchy. Well done :)
ReplyDeleteHey L.p Its Ava I love the way you presented your slide with the cool rainbow fonts and all that,Did you think maybe having a easy font to read
ReplyDeleteIs better cause I found It hard to read. maybe you can have a question like have one of these story's happend to you?. All together i think your slide is awesome :) Bye sincerely Ava.